What goes into the draft
- A hook built from your app's name and pitch, so the first lines already explain the app.
- Feature bullets, one per feature, written as short sentences.
- Who it's for, so the right people recognize themselves.
- A closing line inviting people to try it.
What to leave out
Don't ask for ratings or a number of stars in your description, and don't promise rewards for reviews: both stores forbid it. Leave out prices, "#1" claims and long keyword lists too. Plain descriptions of what the app does work better with people and with store reviewers.